They sent me to the right world. Finally.
Put them onAnd you can seeIt's like you ran out of track! I'm dying for one more metered line: Put them on and you can see blah, blah, something wheee.I need more here, but I like it so far. Seems a bit nebulous still. Be bold.
I never said I was a poet.:)Maybe that is all there is....Seeing what you didn't see before.Can I define what is seen?
Great poem, because it is real it sings. Form can be a servant or a master.
P.S., I was just getting ready to say... "Metered line? What is that?":)(And I can honestly say, I don't know!)
Glad you liked it, Moss. Thanks. If the creative energy flows through the poetic realms again, there may be more. But mostly it doesn't go there.... it goes to fractal world.
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Put them on
And you can see
It's like you ran out of track! I'm dying for one more metered line: Put them on and you can see
blah, blah, something wheee.
I need more here, but I like it so far. Seems a bit nebulous still. Be bold.
I never said I was a poet.
:)
Maybe that is all there is....
Seeing what you didn't see before.
Can I define what is seen?
Great poem, because it is real it sings.
Form can be a servant or a master.
P.S., I was just getting ready to say... "Metered line? What is that?"
:)
(And I can honestly say, I don't know!)
Glad you liked it, Moss. Thanks. If the creative energy flows through the poetic realms again, there may be more. But mostly it doesn't go there.... it goes to fractal world.
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